Perhaps an example of a good-quality post is in order:
Aiko Heiwa, trying to draw something from memory can be tough, but you seem to have little trouble presenting the general idea out of which Pokémon in question it is. However, I agree with hateichikage, as it looks like you tried to rush the drawings which show up as poor-quality outlines, coloring, etc. I believe that if you took a little more time to sketch the outlines while pulling them from your memory, you will amaze yourself with a better version of your work.
[Now try to be detailed.]
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